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Okay, yeah. The problem here I see is your mother hired me because you're not doing
so well in English and you know this is a basic class and you have to do well
because you have to pass it. It's a pre-wet. So I'm seeing that you're
writing these paragraphs but you're not stating what it's about. You don't get to
the point until like the next paragraph or even the paragraph after that. So